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Dear schoolmates, It’s known to us all that money can do lots of things.Nowadays,our country is not very much.Our parents is not easily to make money,so let us doing something for saving money.First,we could go to school by riding a bike rather than by a taxi.Second,we could wear uniform instead of expensive clothes.Third,we can bring lunch instead of buying snacks.Fourth,we can drink water instead of soft drinks.Fifth,we could buy luch a little instead of junk food. in a word, we should do many more things, so that we could save more money for our parents.
