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These days, many people find some communities are built around restaurants. Some maintain it makes their lives more convenient, while others oppose it. As for me, I am in favor of the latter one. First of all, many people in the communities may go out to dinner instead of cooking at home, which will make people lazier. It does harm to their lives. What's more, communities around the restaurants may create health problems. As far as I can see, some restaurants cook the meals with cooked oil, artificial colors, even drugs. People, who enjoy this kind of meal, will suffer from diseases. At the same time, restaurants will pour many leftovers every day, which may make the environment of the communities worse. Last but not least, building communities around the restaurants will cause danger to children. Those who go to restaurants are from all walks of life. As we all know, there are many children in the community. These kids who are exposed to this kind of surroundings will be affected both in the body and mind. For example, children will learn to drink and smoke or be kidnapped. Considering all these conditions, in my point of view, it is not a good idea to build communities around the restaurant.
