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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
There are many factors might affect friendship, such as, social ranking, hobbies, and financial disparity and so on. among those effections, financial disparity has often raised for discussion in different contexts. And it is widely accepted that the financial background plays a significant part of influencing friendship. in 21th century, the world is full of varieties of products, for example, luxury clothes, expensive cars, and services, like, fitness programes. However, it is common to see that most people, who all share some common inerests and often chose to do activities as a group,
