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2007年专八英语作文真题:经济差距影响友谊

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:14浏览次数:4225
要求:
题目 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship.
说明 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship. What do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分47.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;文章词汇词汇丰富度和高级词汇使用熟练度都要继续努力,还要注意单词拼写。

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Friendship, as a vital part of our daily life, is often involving many kinds of discussion on such as whether it would be affected by financial disparity. my statement is that the different financial backgound can surely do harm to a friendship in contexts. people, who live in high quality life, are often found to have holisticly

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