采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
Nowadays, more and more books were published, and the kind of books is variety. How to read has become a hot issue. Somebody thought that Reading should be selective while other thought reading should be extensive. Both of them has a little priciple. But in my opinion, I believe that people should Read selectively. There are some reasons as follows. First of all, everyone has himself or herself interset. It is more effective if you chose the book that you are intersed. What's more, people's energy and memory are limited, so we should do some chices by reading. Last but not lease, reading a book that you choice can strengthen your memory and you can remember the related information so long. As far as I'm concerned, reading selectively is better than reading extensively and it is very important to select the book that you love to read.