2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the Online Shopping.In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in Online Shopping.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,we can not go out shopping.And secondly it could have more choice. Of courese,it have many problems.To begin with,we can not personally to inspect the goods.In addition,Online Shopping may be counterfeit goods. To sum up,we should be conscious of online shopping and think carefully about the things we want.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the online shopping.