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作者词汇基本功很好，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨。
THE IMPACT OF THE INTERNET ON society As internet develops fast these years, great changes is happening in our society. In my opinion, it's the society connection between people and organizations that mostly changes. It can be seen in three aspects. First of all, information is converted at an incredible speed. Hundreds years ago, if I want someone recruited for my factory, advertisement are posted on walls. And only those little group in certain area catching sight of it got the information. But now if I put up a need for employee online, information spread through the country in seconds. Tomorrow a large group of people could come to me for the chance. Second, individuals get control on public. The uper Papi is an example for that. If someone broadcasst a excellent video on website like bilibili, all the society could get interested of it. Ideas converted to public, people are changing their minds. Moreover, now public are able to keep an eye on government all the time. There are many officials being sentenced just because someone find their illegal behavior through internet. For example, Yangdacai was smiling at an accident, wearing an expensive watch on hand. Photo wad taken and put online. Immediately people investigate his past behavior through internet. As a result, his was punished by law for his criminal. In summary, internet links people with others far away, offering a convenient and fast communication. It does help our society developing. But in addition to being glad, it's also our duty to think about what should not be published online, like private life.
