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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Resume Name: Li ming Sex: male Date of birth: June 25th, 1986 Marital status: single Job objective: foreign trade clerk Education background: graduated at North University major English department in July 2008; Personally skills: every subject has high scores; strongly good at listening, writing,speaking and reading; German is the second language and cgot basic German language skills;familiar to the process of foreign trade Hobbies: like playing basketball,singing songs and watching movies, eager to apply for this job