Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Some people think that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. As far as I am concerned, I agree with it, and it is the best way to educate the young people. Full-time education is very important to young people's life. The reasons can be as follows: Firstly, all people should be required to stay in full-time education, because they are not reach maturity, which did not distinguish what is good or bad things. Secondly, in moderm world, most of the companies have the degree requirement and the level is higher and higher, so the young people should stay in full-time education. Finally, in our life, young people should have some basic knowledge that can broaden their mental horizons. Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. Only in this way, can they improve interpersonal skill and make a better life.