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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
College Years Have Prepared You For Your Future Life College is the highest school in our lives, which educate us not only on study but also on life. It prepares us with many qualities that are needed in the future. In my opinion, what benefits us most is the knowledge, the teamwork spirit and the willpower to persist. First, college equip us with useful knowledge. We will choose a job in our specific field after graduate. With specific knowledge equipped, we know what we should. A programer should know how to write java or c , which help him complete task and remain in company. Knowledge helps us stay where we are working. Second, college teaches us how to do teamwork. Nowadays jobs are divided into tiny kinds, requiring different people to corporate to achieve something. A doctor should learn from a engineer about how to operate medical machines. An artist could work with programer to design an app's appearance. We learn how to work in a team, so we are liable to achieve some goal. Moreover, college tells us what's willpower. We once made a model in experiment libaray for tens of hours within a week. There are many reasons for our giving up. But only persisting conferences us success. We developed willpower that supports us to walk further. While we are designing another model at our job, it works. In summary, college offers us many qualities, which are of great using. For me, knowledge, teamwork spirit and willpower are most important. But graduation isn't the end. We are supposed to acquire more qualities in the future.
