正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文章层次较为清晰。
My good friend is Jason. I met him when I was kindergarten student. Jason is pretty tall as a child. He has a black and curly short hair and wears a glass. I think he is very outgoing, because he has a lot of friends. We like to play computer game together in summer vacation, but he always lose the game.