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I have a good friend called Lili who is my delkmate in Middle School. She is a tall girl with long hair. She wears a pair of glasses everyday. She likes English class and works hard on it. We always practice oral English together. She teaches me how to sing English song firstly, and we gradually become the famouse singer in our class. Not only in English, she also helps me a lot on literature homework. She is my best friend forever and I likes her very much.