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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36946
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分48.5分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强高级词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

I have a good friend called Lili who is my delkmate in Middle School. She is a tall girl with long hair. She wears a pair of glasses everyday. She likes English class and works hard on it. We always practice oral English together. She teaches me how to sing English song firstly, and we gradually become the famouse singer in our class. Not only in English, she also helps me a lot on literature homework. She is my best friend forever and I likes her very much.

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