采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。
it is not advisable to get the conclusion directly from seeing and hearing . in our daily live ,we always directly obtain information that we hear and see,we may easily make some comments that are not proper,because we probably misunderstand what we see, the truth will be concealed . for example, when we see someone begs at steet, no legs , we always symphy him, but the fact is what we may never knows, pahapus , he is billinare and he just wants to experience the life. similar instances are numerious ,in one word , in the world , we cannot recognize it as correct that we have seen without jugdement and anasis.
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