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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17591
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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作者词汇基本功很好,一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,不过要注意词汇拼写的检查;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Judgments are made either after a long time of speculating or with one second. When it comes to others to choose which one to believe, some people note that snap judgements can never be trusted. Nevertheless, I hold the opposite opinion. There are times that snap judgments are worth trusting. First, snap judgment doesn't mean the problem are sophiscated. Under most condition, we face daily grinds and often make a conclusion about these trivals which do not more profond thinking. For example my mom always help the family cook , therefore she always goes to the supermarket in order to buy vegetables and meat. Over the years , she can easily tell the fresh ones from those that aren't dilivered that day. Such judgments like this base on the capacity of experiences and observation , which can be cultivated over practice . Therefore , it makes sense that my mom is able to judge the food with a few seconds. What's more, this indicates that not all of the affairs need a further thought and defute the assertment as well. Second, there are exactly times when a snap jugement does make mistakes . Known to be of great importance, the affairs such as choosing future career or friends. One of my friends one proved this to me. He was supposed to buy a house after saving money for a long time. Unfortunately, the prices are high and that are expected to rise according to analysis made by profession. However, he just made a sanp decision that the prices would definitely fall after gathering some information by himself. As a result, expecting the prices to fall,he had to pay much higher to afford one after waiting for months. When the affair is associated with numerous benefits and we aren't quite aware of that field, we should make prudent judgments after looking throught materials and asking advice from others . To sum up , the satement that snap judgments can never be trusted does not make sense. To some extent, sanp judgements can work as well.

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