2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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More importantly, it is a good thing that the proportion of environment in the national expenditure has been increasing in recent years.At the same time,human resources which the essential element as evaluation standards also plays a huge part in the environmental policy. That is to say, it can execute the policy better also enhances the power of the government and fosters the prestige of government .For example, at present, volunteers give us a good explanation for this phenomenon, many people come to the isolated area afforestation in the arid and semi-arid regions to prevent desertification or grassland shrinkag.These phenomenons show that every indiviudal need makes their effort to improve the environment. empirical data 实验数据