2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中词汇表达较准确，高级词汇表达灵活；文章层次较为清晰；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。

Besides, environmental scientist claim that the behaviours of individual are elementary depends on environmental control.To be sure,the everyone′s behaviour is accepted by legal, others, families and schools and other factors. The policy makes some changes and adds increase the institutional restriction. which evidence-based on control contaminate, analyses were based on the raw data to meet the practical needs which strengthened the effectiveness of the policy and are conducive to environment construction. empirical data 实验数据