2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Long long ago, a group of scientists used their brains and exerted their imagination to create the first computer. And today, computers have walked from military to our daily life such as learning, work, entertainment and so on. It brings us lots of advantages. For instance, we can purchase what we want in the internet on the computer instead of shopping in the physical stores. Moreover, not only can it broaden our horizons by surfing different kinds of web like culture, languages, but also it can make our communication with friends convenient. Nevertheless, there is at least two aspects to anything. Overusing computer will lead us to contract in our daily life and harm to our health. More serious is that increasing adolescents are addicted to games on line and always flooded in internet bar but forgetting to have meal, which lead to death. This phenomenon is common. Therefore, how to use computer appropriately is the crucial question. Take me for example. I always make a list or schedule when and how long to use it. Making good use of computer which is friend, abusing computer which is temptation and even poison. Not be controlled by computer.