2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中词汇表达较准确，高级词汇表达灵活；文中衔接词丰富；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

Besides, environmental scientist claim that the behaviours of individual are elementary depends on environmental control. To be sure,the everyone′s behaviour is affected by codices, others, household environment and educational institution and other factors. The policy makes some changes and increases the institutional restriction，which evidence-based on control contaminate, analyses were based on the raw data to meet the practical needs which strengthened the effectiveness of the policy and are conducive to environment construction. empirical data 实验数据