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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. I will still read books in the morning,as my daily life before ,It will take me about two hours a day.After that I'd like to watch TV for a while or till the noon.In the afternoon,I will go outside to find my friend ,then we will go to park together and playing till dinner. My days will be busy but colorful. Yours, David
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