2002年6月英语四级作文真题:Student Use of Computers

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

In the fact, now most people love go abroad to do anything. Teenagers know the western culture from 1950s，then more and more man swing to abroad. I am real enjoy that most people approve of teenegers go abroad situation. In the one hand ，they are so-called study abroad which can gain more profit in job. The other hand，they may joint China and the west culture，then link between science and national economic growth. And China culture can be goes farther， We can see clearly that teenager study abroad can having great growth，but in my opinion，go abroad to study possess a number of bad effect. Some teenager go abroad then wasting chinese credit line and bring about Chinese economic down. And some teenager gone abroad stay all life time. Most important of all，before go abroad will use most money and time to ready luggage. And besides the life's hardship in abroad. The thousand readers will have so much Hamlet. So you can have your ones opinion if you love.