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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
In fact, now most people love to go abroad to do anything. Teenagers learn the western culture from 1950s，then more and more people swing to abroad. I am real glad that most people approve of teenegers go abroad situation. In the one hand, they are so-called study abroad which can gain more profit on job. on the other hand，they may joint China and the west culture，then link between science and national economic growth. And China culture can be farther. We can see clearly that teenager study abroad can having great growth，but in my opinion，go abroad to study possess a number of bad effect. Some teenager go abroad then wasting chinese credit line and bring about Chinese economic down. And some teenager gone abroad stay all life time. Most important of all，before go abroad will use most money and time to ready luggage. And besides the life's hardship in abroad. The thousand of man will have so much Hamlet. So you can have your ones opinion.
