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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
In fact, now most people love to go abroad to do anything. Teenagers learn the western culture from 1950s，then more and more people swing to abroad. I am real glad that most people approve of teenagers go abroad situation. On the one hand, they are so-called study abroad which can gain more profit on job. on the other hand, they may spread China and the west culture, then link between science and national economic growth. And China culture can be farther. We can see clearly that teenager study abroad can having great growth，but in my opinion，go abroad to study of possess a number of bad effect. Some teenager go abroad then wasting chinese credit line and bringing about Chinese economic down. And some teenagers gone abroad had staied all life time. Most important of all，before go abroad will use most money and time to ready luggage. And besides the life's hardship in abroad. thousand of man will have so much Hamlet. If you have your oppinion, you can keep it.
