2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

The environmental- related issues including climate change and ozone depletion water pollution and so on, are not localization to certain areas instead of coverage the whole countries. Thus with the joint efforts of each country use survey methods ,systematically evaluation environmental and evaluation methods ,scientific-positive-experimental model ，interconnectedness of systems ,comparable statistics as basic knowledge to the perfect national environment and government policies to come to the top. At the same time , each country should not give a cold shoulder the phenomenon but that each country and individuals take advantage of scientific and environmental knowledge ，enhancing the environmental moral consciousness and mastering the basic skills of solving the environmental issues to make a great contribution to about carrying out a reasonable scheme and take reasonable steps to manage ecological conservation, preventing and reducing natural disasters and environmental pollution control.