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专栏写一篇80词左右的征文稿，
内容要点如下：
1. 老虎是人们在动物园里最喜欢观看的动物之一；
2. 现在世界上仅存大约3,200只老虎，数目日趋减少；4. 保护老虎的建议。
但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。
Saving Tigers Have you visited zoos? Have you seen tigers in the zoos? I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoo. But now there are about 3200 tigers in the world, and the amount of them is reducing. What caused them to reduce? Because many forests are cut down and they have no place to live in. In order to protect them we must build many natural reserves. And we must stop people from hunting.
