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专栏写一篇80词左右的征文稿，
内容要点如下：
1. 老虎是人们在动物园里最喜欢观看的动物之一；
2. 现在世界上仅存大约3,200只老虎，数目日趋减少；4. 保护老虎的建议。
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Saving Tigers Tigers are very important.Tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoos.As far,Only about have three thousands tigers in the world,And tigers less and less.Why do tigers dangerous in trouble?Because people likes eating tiger's meat very much,so a lot of tigers are shocked,and lots of tigers are killed in the world.So I advise people don't eat tiger's meat,and protect tigers for ours natural more and more beautiful!We should to protect tigers.
