可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分高级词汇,单词拼写也要仔细。
At the present,a part of students didn't value the spelling in English learning.With english becoming popular,many people keep their pace to the trend.Meanwhile,there is also a lot of bad phenomenons that some careless peope mispelled words existing in the society. In the school,students are asked to grasp the key words at any way as quickly as you can in the listening class for improving the grades.They need take notes in the class,so they have to use the easiest method that only can describe the rough meanings to take down. Therefore,mispelling is a common and unavoidable situation among the students. In the views of the above what I mentioned,from my perspectives,I really think that we should advocate and spead the right writing.In school,teachers teaching Engliah should take responsibilities to ask the students to spell words correctly.And students should pay more attention to spelling.