2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Nowadays,wherever you go,you will hear people talk about online shopping.Whether you like it or not,it has become a part of our life. Some people who are in favor of online shopping maintains that enthusiasm.In their view,Online shopping is convenient and cheap.While those who are against this shopping way argue that buy things in the store.Everything has two sides and online shopping is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.There are many deceptive problems in online shopping.If account is stolen, the huge capital will be lost. As far as I am concerned,shopping on the Internet need to be cautious.First of all,we can set code that is not easily guessed.Furthermore,we also can buy things in high credit business.Only in this way can we shopping on the Internet safely.