2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

Beyond question, although there are many barriers which implied knowledge are not well-used and evidence not sufficiently managed to prevent the implementation of policy. Initially, due to short of professional environmental knowledge requires settled the global problem which reflects the vulnerability of humanity. Such as global warming and water as well as air pollution which needs much research and investigation aspect knowledge to reduce the environmental impact. Subsequently, if emergency or abnormality occurs the happening public within their limited confines unable to responded to immediately. For example, the flood and earthquakes or things like that burst out, if people have no idea to the related knowledge such as ,volcanic hot spot，climatic earthquakes, forecasting floods knowledge which they will face the catastrophes even laid down his life . 毫无疑问，虽然有很多障碍，隐含的知识是没有很好的使用和证据没有足够的管理，以防止政策的实施。最初，由于缺乏专业的环境知识，需要解决的全球性问题，反映了人性的脆弱性。如全球变暖和水以及空气污染需要大量的研究和调查方面的知识，以减少对环境的影响。随后，如果发生紧急情况或异常发生在其有限的范围内发生的公众不能立即回应。例如，洪水和地震或类似的事情爆发了，如果人们不知道相关的知识，如火山热点，气候地震，预测洪水知识，他们将面对的灾难，甚至奠定了他的生活