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2015年高考作文优秀范文:中秋节

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:9434
要求:
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
 

用户的作文(系统评分91.5分
评语:

文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;作者在句法层面做的很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

So severe is the risk that we have no choice but to adopt some effective measures to resolve it .Official accountability as the critical element is intended to analyse the government feedback from the public. Due to Chinese officials cannot take the lead to improve the environment, in other ways, although the policy has already drawn up, these leaders lack to initiative and enthusiasm to accept the environmental knowledge and improve ambient。Through he mass media, a variety of communications facilities and communications technology make the public in a short time to get in reality, completely and effectively data and details. In some extreme cases,citizens expressed their dissatisfaction through protests which have for the most part been held peacefully which force to strengthen government. The central government need to invest manpower and financial resources and time to control the environment。Some scholars claimed that the for construction and evaluation of an environmental quality of the city need the government cost much money for it. In addition, some recent analyses suggest that education is central to the development of the nation which let the children have more of a chance to learn about environmental protection knowledge to improve awareness and skill for environment precaution continuously as the fundamental process to protect the environment even eliminate future environmental problems. Firstly, the National People’s Congress develops detailed policies and regulations for the environment to ensure that the stipulates had been implemented.

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