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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；语言不流畅。
From:hubin@163.com Date:01 Dec.2016 TO:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:to attend exhibiton at newyout Dear Mr. I will pleased to konw the 5670 numbers new production form your company between 15 to 22 Dec.we interested that and hoply you can send a price list and instuction for us.we'll appreciated the cooperation with us.More,we can establish business relationship. sincerely yours, zhanghua
