2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；适当增加高级词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多。

Look, a big worm web, isn't it? In every dependent little room, the person is being busy with their own business, such as calling a phone number,chatting with friends or scanning the Internet. They don't talk with others face by face even though they are also close to each other. What might account for this interesting phenomenona? It is not a so surprised pattern that we always connect our friends by Internet instead of communicating with them straightly which makes a long distant in physical. Net itself doesn't worth any critical comments, but we should use it in a appropriate way in the light of disadvantages of Internet that being disable to express feeling adequantly and wasting most time of ourself. Only can we see the smile, the sound, the accent, the clothes of opposites when sharing some funny topic with people. Therefore, the distant of two people became closer and closer. In a word, Internet technology facilitate our life, but we should not neglect the importance of chatting with friends, families, colleages.