- 分享到:
内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；语言不流畅。
From: hubin@163.com Date: 01 Dec.2016 To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject: attending the exhibition in New York Dear Mr. I will pleasedly know the 5670 numbers new production from your company between 15 to 22 Dec. We interested that and hoping you can send a price list and instruction for us. We appreciated the cooperation with us. More, we can establish business relationship. Sincerely yours, Zhang Hua.
