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2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:04浏览次数:5168
要求:
题目 网络的近与远(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning
2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your point of view

大体意思:

网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?


用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基础扎实;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

用户练习作文:

Look, a big worm web, isn't it? In every diverse little room, the person is being busy with their own business, such as calling a phone number,chatting with friends or scanning the Internet. They don't talk with others face by face even though they are also close to each other. What might account for this interesting phenomena? It is not a so surprised pattern that we always connect our friends by Internet instead of communicating with them straightly which makes a long distant in physical. Net itself doesn't worth any critical comments, but we should use it in an appropriate way in the light of disadvantages of Internet that being disabled to express feeling adequately and wasting most times of ourselves. Only can we see the smile, the sound, the accent, the clothes of opposites when sharing some funny topic with people. Therefore, the distant of two people became closer and closer. In a word, Internet technology facilitates our life, but we should not neglect the importance of chatting with friends, families, colleagues.

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