高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段。

My town In my mind,my town ws very beautiful.We live the town where trees are around of it.there is a river.Inthe river ,there are many fish.when I was young,i ofe played with friends.Although houses are simple and crude,streets are short,people worked hard,we are happy.Now high-rise buildings stand in the great numbers.Cars roam streets.Industrial development environment deterioration.trees and fish are little than before.We should procet environment.