2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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The environmental policies work at full capacity depend on government and individual should make efforts.The central government should maintain close ties with local communities and the public through publicising the activities on the environment and assisting environmental conservation activities to raise environmental protection awareness of the public and realise that ecological management， which promoting sustainable development and satisfied the public's expectation of the continuously to increasing happiness. 中央政府应保持密切联系与当地社区和公众通过宣传活动对环境和帮助环境保护活动,提高公众的环境保护意识,意识到生态管理,促进可持续发展和满足公众的期望不断增加的幸福。On the one hand, the government access to deep knowledge commitment to develop environmental science and technology in order that better the fit with the requirement of economic development. 另一方面,政府获得深入了解承诺开发环境科学与技术,以便更好的适应经济发展的要求To achieve the goal of environment-friendly society, these depend on senior government officials, especially for ministries and agencies responsible for the environment require to take a more strategic and comprehensive policy.One the other hand, the environment requires the involvement of individual which only through by our personal effort that built a better future. 环境需要个体的参与,只有通过个人的努力,建立了一个更好的未来。citizens can use shallow knowledge and adhere to the requirements of laws and codes to create a better tomorrow than today. 一方面,公民可以使用浅知识和遵守法律和法规的要求创建一个比今天美好的明天Citizens active in learning new environmental technology and conform with strict to environmental laws and regulations which into evidence and managed in a responsible manner to promote the twin objectives to creating a better tomorrow.