初中英语命题作文真题演练(51):健康

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

I think I’m pretty healthy．I exercise every day．A lot of my classmates like to eat junk food，but I never eat it．I think it’s bad for our health．I like to eat apples a lot because I think that one apple a day keeps the doctors away．Every day I like to drink a lot of water because water can develop the blood cycling．Vegetables are my favorite，too．I think we can get a lot of vitamins from them．My classmates think I am a vegetarianism．But I think that I also take enough meat，eggs and much other stuff．And I think that I am really healthy．