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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Judge a person by his appearance Our mom and teacher always tell us :"do not judge a person by his appearance." But most of can not do it. Because we are easily changed by one man's appearance. A good-looking makes us feel happiness and freedom, while a poor appearance brings much more boring. But to all of us, we should make a clear mind, that we cannot judge a person by his appearance. On the one hand, appearance is dependent on gene, no one can expect to change it. In other words, a man's appearance is decided when he or she is born, it does not have any related with them. On the other hand, in our daily communication, we should decline to heart. And we should judge a person by his experience and success, which can be changed by them. We are human being, and we have the ability to think, so we can not decide one thing surface, we should consider it in our deep heart.

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