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2015年高考作文优秀范文:中秋节

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:9427
要求:
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
 

用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者句法基础较为扎实;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

According to the situation of China, environmental policies, we can learn a lot from the case study. To start with, the government may use policy-relevant knowledge to draw up more effective policy such as carbon taxes, aiming of restricting general public environmental damage behaviour to mitigation of global warming. Besides, every individual can continue acquiring the environmental knowledge to build rational structure of knowledge to make the environmental policy more fully. Because it is not only government enact a precise policy to figure out about environmental issues, everybody tried their best to keep in mind that protect the environment , it starts from me. Secondly, the central build up completely supervision system to meet the needs of the environment because policy interventions that will help produce and implement environment and encourage the officials to do what is right for the public and the country. Such as economic affairs every expenditure as basic evidence which policy should be including combines with occasional causality and the objective attribution opinion by way of an analytical method. These practices are more likely to improve the investment environment, social management and public service functions also accelerating market system construction. Thirdly, strengthening of multi-level mechanism for environmental responsibility is to promote environment protection need make everybody's efforts.According the calculation, continued the growth of population as the practicable basis ,the environmental policy which diffusion of environmentally starved of knowledge plays a major role in discouraging environmentally damaging forms of behaviour, promotion of a scientific and rational and effective environmental knowledge, making people living better and having more productive live.

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