单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
The writer didn’t enjoy the play in the theatre last week. A young man and a young woman were sitting behind him. They talked so loudly that the write couldn’t hear the actors. Then he turned round and said ‘I can’t hear a word!’ The young man answered ‘this is a private conversation!’