2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

Children could be cured of short-sightedness by wearing soft contact lenses at night which re-shape their eyes to prevent them ever needing glasses, a study has shown. Trials involving more than 300 children in Britain and across the world showed that the lenses can stop the eye becoming misshapen which leads to myopia.