2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

Moreover, in the policy the central government enacts some provisions based on the real situation in China which owns expansive territory and huge population so actually executes and management depends on local government which does not follow the central government policies.That is to say,after the reform and opening-up，China's rapid economic growth coalescent deregulation and inadequate regulation create environmental issues. These intensify social contradictions cause resentment during the public, in order to address the issues, the national government enacts numerous steps aim at preventing and control of pollution and implement some projects for sustainable development programs also improve the environmental conditions, local government who are only pursuing economic interests at the expense of the environment. Besides, due to the unwilling and corrupt local government hindered the effective implementation of the policy.