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China ′s environmental policy duo to lack of knowledge or at least a deficit a strong case obviously is not consistent with reality. Environmental policies which understand what government does and their effects on citizens in China played an extensive and essential role in recent decades which laws down the National People's Congress as well as assist in the management department of the Environment. Nonetheless duo to public lacked of Knowledge of water resources and scientific evidence leading to policy failure in China. For example, due to the rapid development of human society, water pollution becoming increasingly intensified every day, which leading to lack of water and contamination particularly in underprivileged areas the wasting water is very serious because poor people short of opportunities to learn the how to protect the water resources and short of know-how in water management and purification.Therefore, not only resulting in restricting the economic development for the whole country but also threatens human the existence of beings. Accordingly, in remote mountain areas,by environmental education and transmission of scientific knowledge to make the public do their best to having awareness and comprehension of the environmental public in order that make a contribution to the whole society.It is important that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.