文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
Although these elements demonstrate China will try their best to improve the environment, the fact that public owing to within their limited environmental knowledge base and skills does hinder the effective implementation of the policy. At the same time, the public, environmental protection consciousness still weak and do not have scientific knowledge of creating a friendly environment. Environmental deterioration with greater risks to our survival for years to come also a big issue for China . Above phenomenon shows,face the policy failure,we should come up with a good way to solve it.in the future, when relate to how to protect the environment and the natural resources efficiently ,on the one hand,individual should be able to study more bit of knowledge in the environmental public and experiences in order that the better deal with other cases.