文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication Nowadays ,with the development of the technology and economic ,internet is becoming more and more popular among people ,so many people choose to communicate with their friends on the internet . The reason why people prefer using the internet on interpersonal communication are as follows .first ,internet is more convenient than the other ways,people can enjoy themselves .second ,internet is around us at any time . The impact of the internet on interpersonal communication are obvious ,like every coin has two sides ,the advantage of it can make people know a lot ,the disadvantage of it may causing treat ,above all,we can conclude that we should make good use of the internet.
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