内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec. 26th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hobnail,tom Subject: To establish business relationships Dear Sir or Madam, I knew your new product of No. 5670 during the exhibition held in New York on the date of Dec. 15th to 22rid and I was quite interested in it. Please send us a price list and an instruction. Thank you for your attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely