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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。
I knew your new product of No. 5670 during the exhibition held in New York on the date of Dec. 15th to 22rid and I was quite interested in it. Please send us a price list and an instruction. Thank you for your attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. We are looking forward to your early reply
