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From: mingh@huaxin.com.cn Date: Oct.15,2013,9:30 AM To: plockwood@jbs.com.ca Subject: Please send us L/C against S/C No.HT130927 as soon as possible Dear Mr. Lockwood, We are very pleased to have signed S/C No.HT130927 with you. As contracted, the relative L/C should have reached us before today. However, we have not had any news from you. As the date of delivery is only one moth away, our goods has already prepared, please see to it that the L/C is opened as soon as possible. For avoiding some mistakes happened, we would like to tell you that our advising bank is China Bank Shanghai Branch rather than China Bank. Your prompt attention to these matters will be appreciated. Yours sincerely, Huang Ming Huaxin Trading Co., Ltd. 14th Floor Commercial Building, 676 Jinlin Road Shanghai, China Tel: 0086-21-62597480 Fax: 0086-21-62597490 E-mail: mingh@huaxin.com.cn http://www.huaxin.com.cn
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