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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40880
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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From: mingh@huaxin.com.cn Date: Oct.15,2013,9:30 AM To: plockwood@jbs.com.ca Subject: Please send us L/C against S/C No.HT130927 as soon as possible Dear Mr. Lockwood, We are very pleased to have signed S/C No.HT130927 with you. As contracted, the relative L/C should have reached us before today. However, we have not had any news from you. As the date of delivery is only one moth away, our goods has already prepared, please see to it that the L/C is opened as soon as possible. For avoiding some mistakes happened, we would like to tell you that advising bank is China Bank Shanghai Branch rather than China Bank. Your prompt attention to these matters will be appreciated. Yours sincerely, Huang Ming Huaxin Trading Co., Ltd. 14th Floor Commercial Building, 676 Jinlin Road Shanghai, China Tel: 0086-21-62597480 Fax: 0086-21-62597490 E-mail: mingh@huaxin.com.cn http://www.huaxin.com.cn

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