2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

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As is shown in the picture above,a boat,travelling on the lake,carries two travellors who appreciate the views ,as well as throwing out the rubies on the lake.Their behaviors seriously break down the beauty of the nature,which is provoking and thoughtful for us. Obviously,the cartoon indicates us that our enviroments have be seriously polluted,as the humans less awareness protecting nature.Nature is the home of humans,everyone should love her and make our efforts to maintain its balance between humans and enviroments. In my opinion,some measures should be taken to protect the nature.On the one hand,goverment should make relevant rules to bound people.On the other hand,citizens should improve their awareness of protecting nature.I strongly believe that our enviroments would be better though combination efforts of goverment and public.