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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:15浏览次数:7002
要求:
中考马上要结束了,考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David,你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信,告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情,并说明理由。
注意:1. 60词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上。


Dear Fred,
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
_________________________________
Yours,
David
用户的作文(系统评分50.5分
评语:

简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

Dear Fred I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. First of all, I am going to Beijing. It is my favorite city. From some pictures and TV, I know it is very beautiful. I am interested to its history. I will see kinds of interesting places such as The Great Wall,The Palace and so on. Then I wiil read some books. Books are like friends to me . I would learn many things that I had never knew before. At last but it is best that I will do some housework. My parents often do all of housework and also take care of me. They are very tired. When I am free, I should share something. What about you ? What plans do you have? Yours David

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