简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Dear Fred I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. First of all, I am going to Beijing. It is my favorite city. From some pictures and TV, I know it is very beautiful. I am interested to its history. I will see kinds of interesting places such as The Great Wall,The Palace and so on. Then I wiil read some books. Books are like friends to me . I would learn many things that I had never knew before. At last but it is best that I will do some housework. My parents often do all of housework and also take care of me. They are very tired. When I am free, I should share something. What about you ? What plans do you have? Yours David
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